Inspiration and Destiny

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  1. mfrieler

    mfrieler Active Member

    Inspiration and Destinty​


    Inspiration burns while destiny soars

    Into endless worlds our fates are born

    Some left sick, others with no hope

    But some brought forth with ways to cope

    Seasons end short while fires burn fast

    Destiny and inspiration never seem to last

    Corners cut too short while people live too long

    Sharp pains approach as weak fight the strong

    Destiny and inspiration always seem to fade

    People are always naive to the crisis' they have made

    Corners cut too short while people fight for nothing

    Cruelty exceeds as the queer fight for something

    Coils bend, snap, and break

    People are always naive to the crisis they make

    Coils twist, contort, and strain

    We watch in amazement as the stars fall in rain

    Destiny and inspiration never seem to last

    But they come back just in time to help us make it past​
     
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    mfrieler,
    Wow that is a great poem. It is very deep and it is very emotional. Destiny and inspirationdoes always come back to help us make it past something. I am glad that, that is how you worded the ending of it. It does give someone hope I think. If you ever need to talk feel free to send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as possible. I hope to see some more poems by you. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    A very brilliant write! I love it!
     
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