Internal Scars *Trigger?*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, Aug 29, 2007.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Reaching out to empty air,
    you yell and cry but no one's there to
    end the pain and vivid thoughts, to
    make the villains show remorse.
    Internal scars weeping blood
    to the extent where your insides flood,
    Choking as you gasp for breath
    they have their clutch you cannot bear
    to live...
    another day like this.
     
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    ....wow...

    I love this, especially the rhyming in it.

    :hug:

    TDM
     
  3. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I too love this poem Resistance. I like the way your worded it and made it all come together. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. It is deep and emotional but also very powerful. Remember if you need me I am only a pm away. Take care and I love you sweetie. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I understand the feelings all too well and wish I could help you but can do no more than to understand and send you love and friendship, I hope that helps at least a little.

    love, least xoxo
     
  5. Lovely dear! Very well put. :hug:
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Lovely poem elaine!
     
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