"Invisible Angel"

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  1. ScouseJM

    ScouseJM Well-Known Member

    This is old but I still like it myself so... thought Id share x


    Invisible Angel

    Change baby change, before you lose what you've got
    Darlin remember all the things you forgot
    Be aware of this chance and dont let it pass
    You never know, it could be your last
    Dont turn your back on all the good in your life
    You'll regret it soon when you're alone late at night
    Dont mind me, I dont matter at all
    Invisible angel, here to catch you from the fall
    Cant you hear the words Im whisperin in your ear?
    Doesnt matter where they come from as long as they are here
    Get out of bed and look outside
    You'll find one bright shining star in the sky
    An invisible angel will fly past your door and then
    You'll feel it when the wind touches your skin
    Dont worry about the tears falling down
    I'll dry them all, though you cant see Im around
    You might not even remember me
    But I'll be with you constantly
    Hopin to watch you change baby change
    Before you lose what you've got
    Remindin you of all the things you forgot
    Im here with a love so deep and true
    An invisible angel, watching over you
     
  2. carol2237

    carol2237 Guest

    that was really good hunny. you should write a book ;)

    Caroline
    ~if your going through hell, keep on going~
     
  3. That was Sooooooo BEAUTIFUL!!! No wonder it's still one of your favorites! (Reading it was like music!)

    It was immediately eerie, haunting reading it, not only because it was so well-expressed - but reminding me of a poem I'd written for my one-and-only beloved niece years ago when she was quite young, though her life was already full of bitter turmoil...

    (I hope you don't mind me sharing...I want to thank you for taking me back!)

    ~ For Brittany Rose ~

    Dearest child!
    We are your blessing, and bane,
    holding you tightly in our hearts,
    yet waiting for the world to take you away

    A fond and cherished memeory
    of all the things you were
    You are our hope
    And will be
    A signal for our love to grow,
    yet never knowing what you will know

    Light and laughter, you dearest being...
    You are a child, and we the ones who see
    what happens when the child lets go
    forgetting all good knowledge you now own...

    (1998) (!)
     
    Last edited: Mar 5, 2008
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I am touched:sad:
     
  5. ScouseJM

    ScouseJM Well-Known Member

    thank u for sharing ur beautiful poem foundandlost x
     
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