Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoReVeR LoSt, Nov 12, 2006.

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  1. FoReVeR LoSt

    FoReVeR LoSt Well-Known Member

    I’m invisible to you, you don’t see my pain
    I’m going to catch the fuck you train
    Get the hell out of here and this mess
    Leave you with all this fucking stress

    I’m getting away from the screaming and crying
    I’m so fucking sick and tired of trying
    Trying to pretend for you that I’m happy
    When you should fucking know I’m crappy

    You don’t see the tears that fall from my face
    The sadness that just seems to fall into place
    The scars that have taken away the beauty
    To you it feels like a fucking duty

    One day I’ll be gone and you’ll never know why
    I’ll be lying in my coffin and you’ll have to say bye
    Bye to the sweet, disturbed, lonely girl that u knew
    With the lips and hands that are slowly turning blue

    That day that you walked the other way
    That was the day the sky turned grey
    I haven’t felt so much hurt in so long
    I hope that you know you were wrong

    I was trying to get better for you
    Too bad that you didn’t have a clue
    You made me feel like a piece of dirt
    I hope you know you caused my hurt
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  3. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    I can relate to the expressively strong emotion within this piece. It has such depth within, and I can easily sense the anger. It's a genuinely honest piece.

    Nice work! and I hope things aren't so bad.

  4. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    nice work hun!!

  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Nice :smile:
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