Is there anyone there?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by we'll see, Jul 17, 2009.

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  1. we'll see

    we'll see Member

    Why the pain?
    Why the void?
    Why the loneliness?

    What's my path?
    What's my purpose?
    What's the point?

    Where to go?
    Where's the end?
    Where are you?

    God, i need help.
    God, i need to understand.
    God, i want to be free.
     
  2. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    I think the only way to find out those answers is to keep going, to keep wandering, no one else will do that for you.
     
  3. Almostgone

    Almostgone Member

    From the emotion you express so clearly, your heart is not black. The need to percieve is such a hard path. I am on it too.

    Your words are effecting.
     
  4. MissKerouac

    MissKerouac Active Member

    This is simple but painful. There's so much behind each question and I can relate a lot.

    I don't know if we'll ever find the answers but we can hold on and keep on searching.
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem!
     
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