It helps?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Pink Teardrops, Jun 12, 2010.

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  1. Pink Teardrops

    Pink Teardrops Well-Known Member

    A poem to write
    they say,
    helps get you through the night.
    When you're feeling down
    pick up a pen
    and leave the razor on the ground.



    I can't see how
    these pointless words will help,
    letting one by one flow from my mind.

    These words can last, just like the scars
    but there's no feeling to them,
    no touch,
    no high,

    just,
    silent black ink on empty white paper.

    What is it that I feel?
    this pain,
    I can't explain
    where does it come from?
    and why?
    when everything's alright.

    I'm writing, my only tears
    for I fear the blade,
    it's sinking depth increases

    but like my eyes
    these words are dry
    and
    I can't help but find
    some way to cry!

    I'll write the poem,
    just as asked

    and I'll save it


    on my skin.....
     
  2. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    :hugtackles::hugtackles:
     
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Very well said.

    :pokeball:
     
  4. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    well written...i cried reading it :hug:
     
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