It Means Something

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Jun 28, 2007.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    I see how you look my way
    Cancelling out the shades of grey.
    Contemplate me​

    I can only imagine how much you crave
    We can keep this secret;take it to our grave
    Just foresake me​

    Bring yourself closer to me than ever
    Remind me that you're mine forever
    Penetrate me​

    Take advantage of this night
    holding back, lets end the fight.
    Desicrate me​

    Steal me away and do what you will
    Eat me up until you get your fill
    Mutilate me​

    Dont worry it will all be okay
    What's life with all work and now play?
    Annihalate me​
  2. I love it! I love it! That was truly beautiful! :biggrin: hope you continue to write hun. I enjoyed reading it.
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    Aww, it's so good, hun. :smile: :hug:
  4. Zueri

    Zueri Well-Known Member

    Loves it! Keep writing!! :hug:
  5. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    truly amazing. :hug:
  6. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    You're so smart, Goggle Head. :hug:

    Me likes. :clap:
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I too like it a lot. Very creative use of language, besides the ideas you impart... I think you have a lot of talent in writing. Your poetry certainly proves that.:smile:
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