it rhymes..

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Nov 8, 2006.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    hmm ok so i posted a different variation of this a while ago...which was kind of more of a mixture of two poems..this one got finished yesterday. ironically its the first thing i ever wrote that rhymes. not really a fan of the rhyming anyway but i dunno it just happened.


    Darkness taking over -
    The gun lies by her side.
    They won't know it's murder,
    They'll say it's suicide.

    The war was never over,
    The battle never won.
    She wishes it was different,
    That this day had never come.

    She plans it all quite calmly,
    No tears left for today.
    She's so so sorry for those she's hurt
    And for this she fades away.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    i like it :)
     
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