Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by special_needs, Dec 27, 2006.

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  1. special_needs

    special_needs Well-Known Member

    This is my favourite part of sf, so i thought i could post something here too...
    it is one of my first tries, so please be honest!


    Is it a scream?
    I think i can hear it.
    Is it the sun?
    I blindly see it.
    Is it a monster?
    Because it can surely hurt.
    Is it an illusion?
    It seemed better yesterday.
    Is it far?
    Sometimes feels like its just miles away.
    Is it good?
    Maybe, have i tried yet?

    I dont care,
    i DO know its unfair.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I don't believe there are any definite 'rules' regarding poetry, only that it be your honest expression of "whatever". I like it:smile: , but what really matters is: do you like it?:unsure:

  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    its a great poem...

    i am glad that it works...

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