Ita Sit (english: "so be it")

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, Sep 4, 2008.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    In the still of the night
    When there is you and you alone
    And your tired of the fight
    And all that life has thrown.

    Do you ache for some peace
    Some voice to break the stillness
    Do you cry for some release
    Some end to all the illness.

    The loneliness, the pain
    Of the ever grinding day.
    Other peoples' disdain
    And the malice they relay.

    Do you hear the lies
    Told of love and caring.
    Till you scream to the skies
    For the load you are bearing.

    This is how it is
    And how it will be
    Till we join the lists
    Of the dead and the free.
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Holy wow! That is really good. How I can relate to every single word in that poem. Good writes Terry :hug:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Awesome poem hun :arms:
     
  4. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Amazing.

    :hug:
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much!:smile:
     
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