Its not me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by total eclipse, Nov 21, 2009.

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  1. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    its not me
    i say again and again
    its not me
    so don't pretend
    to think you know everything
    because its not me
    who cries and screams
    its not me whos afraid of the dark
    its not me who fears everyone everything
    although its the way it seems
    no it not me not at all
    its someone else
    so very small
    who sometimes doesn't make
    a sound at all
    its not me
     
  2. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    i like this :hug: good job
     
  3. Hangman

    Hangman Well-Known Member

    beautiful poem :)
     
  4. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    violet, I really like this poem. Opening and closing with the same words adds impact, especially since the same phrase runs through the whole poem. Well done!
     
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

  6. bubblin girl

    bubblin girl Well-Known Member

    I love it...nice choice of words :)
     
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