June Bug

Discussion in 'I Have a Question...' started by Anon4Now, May 12, 2008.

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  1. Anon4Now

    Anon4Now Guest

    June Bug

    “A wounded June bug is more intelligent,”
    I say silently.

    He pounds his head
    and fists against

    What he wants
    is not
    I need.

    “A June bug knows
    when it has hit
    a wall,”
    I think.

    “The only difference is that unlike me,
    a wounded June bug
    knows enough
    to crawl away,
    even if it
    cannot fly.”
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    :hug: Beautiful.
  3. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    A beautifully written expression of your inner turmoil. Keep using your poetry to get things out!
  4. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    I love this so much. Good job, hun. :hug: !!!!
  5. famous.last.words

    famous.last.words Forum Buddy

    thats really lovely, well done
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    well done:smile:
  7. I keep coming back to read this again and again...and I still don't know what to say except that in so few words - you said SOOOOoooooo much!

    That, and June bugs have *always* made me say...WTF! :blink:
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