Just a poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lorax, Oct 9, 2013.

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  1. Lorax

    Lorax Well-Known Member

    We stared, in awe.
    At what we saw.
    A life so short, so filled with pain.
    Thought what's left to gain?
    Is it really worth while?
    Just to live & force our smile?
    Is there hope, beyond our gasps?
    Or is it just short of our grasps?
    Why not give up today?
    Life is the game, we don't want to play.
    Can we ever win?
    Is dying sooner that big of a sin?
    We have the right, do we not?
    Our battle is lost, we already fought.

    Yea, manic poetry time :)
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    No battle is lost as long as we are here fighting there is always hope always
  3. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Eccentric writer, general weirdo, heedless heathen

    I can really relate to this one...thanks for sharing :)
  4. prakash

    prakash Well-Known Member

    think happy thoughts. Dont be so negative!!!
    Have hope. Without hope life is dull.
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