Just a poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by neverwanted, Jan 11, 2010.

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  1. neverwanted

    neverwanted Well-Known Member

    I wrote a poem some time ago, it is one of many since then.
    I just wanted to know what you think?

    Lurking in the Shadows
    Of the midnight sky,
    Something Beautiful Without
    Light caught my eye.
    By the power of the wind
    And the force of a fire,
    I dare not look
    for i knew i could dier.
    The pain that once was
    Lingers no more,
    All that is left is the emptiness
    through to the core.
    Any person ever to see
    This beautiful delight,
    Has never lived to tell the tale
    of this magnificent sight.
    All have surcome to its
    elegance and beauty,
    For it stands there draped
    In all which is its duty.
    Watching the dawn of
    a summers day rise,
    The light of a thousand fires
    Dance within its eyes.
    And slowly disappearing
    As if a horrific dream,
    I slowly arose
    No noise, No scream.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    very poetic indeed.
  3. neverwanted

    neverwanted Well-Known Member

    Don't let your mind get weary
    And confused you will be still, don't try.
    Don't let your heart get heavy
    Child, inside you theres a strength that lies.

    Don't let your soul get lonely
    Child, it's only time, it will go by.
    Dont look for love in faces, places
    It's in you thats where you'll find kindness.

    Be here now, Be here now.
    Be, Be here now, Be here now.

    Don't lose your faith in me
    And i will try not to lose my faith in you.
    Don't put your trust in walls
    'cause walls will only crush you when they fall.

    Be, Be here now, Be here now.
    Be, Be here now, Be here now.

    Ray Lamontagne
  4. Bambi

    Bambi Well-Known Member

    that was beautiful...you write well
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