just another poem ^^

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  1. Nyu

    Nyu Well-Known Member

    For Daddy, R.I.P.

    By, Kira

    If i had only known
    you'd be gone today
    i would have called you
    just yesterday

    If i had only known
    i would never see you again
    i would have said sorry
    for all the things i've done

    If i had only known
    the pain you were in
    i would have been there
    to ease your burden

    If i had only known
    how short the time is we have
    i would have told you
    i love you dad
     
  2. Datsik

    Datsik Forum Buddy

    That's so sweet. =]
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That is a very loving tribute to your dad! I like it very much!:smile:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautiful poem :arms:
     
  5. butterflies32

    butterflies32 Well-Known Member

    :hug: Sweetheart. That is gorgeous. If your dad was able to read that then he would be proud.

    Sam
    xxx
     
  6. Nyu

    Nyu Well-Known Member

    thanks everyone :)

    i actually wrote that the same day i found out he had died. usually , im not too good at rhyming...but yh, im glad you like it ^^
     
  7. Lady Byron

    Lady Byron Well-Known Member

    awww that was really sweet. it gave me chills. :smile:
     
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