just another poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by justmeonlyme, Oct 10, 2009.

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  1. justmeonlyme

    justmeonlyme Long Time SFer Staff Alumni

    i often start small,
    then i just keep growing,
    i could be controling anyone,
    the smart one who hides away,
    the popular one who has it all,
    the sporty guy who wins the hearts,
    the player who uses then losses,
    the one who is always smilling and happy,
    it couldbe controling anyone,
    your bestfriend,
    your enermy,
    an acantance,
    or even you,
    i take over your life,
    bit by bit,
    i tell you what to wear,
    were you can and can't go,
    i convince you to tell no one,
    i take you over,
    before you no it you can't stop,
    i have many names:
    self mutilation,
    self harm,
    self injury,
    and many more,
    i come in many forms,
    hair pulling,
    bone breacking,
    they are just some of my tricks,
    but the one thing to remember is,
  2. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    I love that your poem has a sympathy for all these different kinds of people who harm themselves who are hiding it away. Maybe strength can be gotten from having people in one's life that one doesn't have to hide from...
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Excellent poem i love the ending so true.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Awesome poem :) :hug:
  5. britwolf

    britwolf New Member

    I love the ending very nice.,
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