Just another poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Daijou, Sep 10, 2010.

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  1. Daijou

    Daijou Well-Known Member

    There's really no need for me to explain this one, it should be fairly obvious how I was feeling when I wrote it. Hope you guys enjoy it.

    Perpetual Daydream

    The world inside my head
    Grows more vivid every day.
    It’s a place I can escape to,
    In all the disarray.

    To share it with another person,
    Would make it all worthwhile.
    But there are things that can never be,
    No matter how hard I try.

    In emptiness and void,
    I sit here all alone.
    Longing for a conversation
    Until all hope is gone.

    Days come and go all blurred in time.
    The seasons mix together.
    How long must I endure,
    This loneliness of forever?​
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    well written sad though you can always come here and people will listen
    keep writing okay let your feeling continue to come out thatway
  3. Daijou

    Daijou Well-Known Member

    That's the reason I came here, people understand me and it's more comfortable. I also forgot to mention this one was written about two years ago, but not a lot has changed on how I feel about anything.

    Thanks for reading :)
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