just cant stop..

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ThornThatNeverHeals, Mar 27, 2012.

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  1. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    i cannot stop the tears from falling,
    death from calling,
    or the thoughts that are so apalling.

    i cant stop the silent screaming,
    crying and pleading,
    always begging you to help me...

    i cannot get you to hear,
    the words dont seem to reach your ear...
    you... whom i hold most dear...

    i cant stop the knife from cutting,
    the pain is completely gutting,
    everything just seems so bloody.

    soon i wont try to stop the death...
    it is all that i have left...
    it will come and a promise will be kept.
  2. scarlett149

    scarlett149 New Member

    that was great, it was exactly how i felt.
  3. Witty_Sarcasm

    Witty_Sarcasm Eccentric writer, general weirdo, heedless heathen

    This sounds a lot like me lately...I enjoyed reading this
  4. diamond2

    diamond2 Active Member

    i love this... sums up everything all in one go..."a promise will be kept" was a great way to end it.... made me feel like you knew exactly what i'm feeling atmx
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