Just let go

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Oct 10, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Break the chain
    to jump, to fly, to leave

    free yourself
    no need to be afraid no need to cry

    enjoy the drop
    leave this world and everyone behind

    be happy
    it is possible to acheive

    go to the edge
    take the step spread your arms

    feel the air
    feel the freedom and surprise

    just let go
    leave it all behind
     
  2. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    I like this one a lot. keep writing. :)
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much but the feelings behind it scare me - you won't act on those feelings, will you?:sad: Please promise me you won't 'let go' - of us or of life. There's so much waiting for you, dear, please let life happen to you.:smile: :smile:

    love,

    least


    you keep on getting better and better - keep writing!:smile:
     
  4. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    i haevnt acted on them yet, but i cant make any promises
     
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