"Just One...Please"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Dec 1, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    It swirls
    Caught in the momentum
    The ice melts
    I forgave them
    All of the shadows
    All of the past
    All of the sorrow
    Enduring I last
    Stirring my finger
    Swirling I linger
    Over the lip
    Of the frozen glass
    Craveing the taste
    Not a drop will I waste
    I softly await
    The burn of my past.

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  2. thedeafmusician

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  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    :eek:hmy: :smile: Exceptional, as always!!:smile: :eek:hmy:

    Thanks for sharing your work with us. I love reading your poems!


  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member


    so good...

    keep them coming..

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