Just something...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jess, Feb 22, 2006.

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  1. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Some people told me that writing poems may come of some comfort when hurting likes this.... this is all I could get, not good.. but I tried I guess...

    Sometimes at night I sit alone in my room
    and I'm waiting on my knees for you
    my eyes are closed, a tear rolls down my face
    knowing I'm familiar with this place
    The night changes, stars are blown away
    and you see, some people can change
    why would you treat me this way?

    I still hear you..
    I cry for a moment
    I can hear you calling my name
    and I'm alone again...

    Sitting outside, the wind blows
    I hear the thunder in the distance
    Rain begins to fall, like tear drops on my pillow

    but I can still smell you on my clothes
    the night changes to morning
    tell me why would you treat me this way?

    I lay my head down.. possibly for the last time...
    and I think of you
  2. gothic_spleen

    gothic_spleen Antiquities Friend

    damn...that so spoke to me...that is so how i feel about markus...he call to me and the tears flow ....this may be the last night....good poem keep writing u do very well
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    OMG! i actually felt that poem..

    i am in tears now, but its good tears...

    Keep up the good work...

    love BP
  4. Hey - its good - shows a lot of emotion in there hun :hug:


  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

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