Just the way i'm feeling

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Decode, Aug 19, 2010.

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  1. Decode

    Decode Well-Known Member

    This is just the way i'm feeling.


    Statue...?


    Forgive the statue staring on, it knows nothing else now.
    Time, joy, life passes by its eyes. Oblivious.
    The statue does not turn or see. Its just a statue.
    People no longer look, this statue is old, they have seen it many times.
    Its stone walled expression never changes.
    Death. Statues don't dream off death. Their already dead. They just don't look it yet.
    A statue or a shell, a mask. Its dead who cares.
    Glistening on that mask, a glimmer a tear, i'm no statue.
    What is that? No, statues can't cry. I'm not dead.
    I'm no statue. Yet.
     
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    it is good you cry to let the pain out i hope you don't turn to that statue with no emotion it is a bad place to be people notice you here you are not forgotten
     
  3. plates

    plates Well-Known Member

    i like it loads :hug:
     
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