Lament

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  1. Lament

    Take,
    oh take me away
    from this rampant insanity
    I no longer know me
    I have flown into the abyss
    I have kissed
    reality goodbye
    through no fault of my own
    And all the many seeds sown
    have fallen into
    ruin and decay
    I did not ask to have things my way
    but to stay on the path
    I asked for help every day
    Yet I don’t know
    how I became so lost
    I don’t know why
    I must pay the cost
    of Fate’s dangling
    with my spirit,
    with each touch,
    searing it
    Just what was it,
    what deed,
    that cursed my soul
    and damned my needs?
    Life does not need to be fair
    to learn lessons,
    especially when alone
    But surely I earned
    what I knew,
    so why must I confess
    to sins that aren’t my own...



    FAL1
     
    Last edited: Aug 6, 2007
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    FAL1,
    I love the poem. It is deep and emotional and it is also very powerful. I love the way that you worded your poem. I hope to see more of your poems. If you ever need to talk I am here for you. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  3. Thanks so much Crystal...

    but what I wanna talk about there ain't no cure for...

    FAL1
     
  4. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    FAL,
    I am so sorry that you feel that way. Just remember I am here if you need me. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss


    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    ANother work of art! You have such a gift for expression. I only wish the expression weren't so sad.

    love, least xoxo
     
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