Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Feb 10, 2007.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Is there any other time I would rather spend
    Than exploreing every curve
    Every tender inch of your body
    As tho it were a flawless pearl -

    If I cannot give credit to God
    Then randon elements of nature
    Created that form which I adore?
    I could live and breathe
    Every moment with, loose myself in
    Become a fraction as surely as if
    I had been born again
    With only your breath
    Your lips
    Your touch
    To teach me anew...

    You would be the greatest adventure
    Sweet as the softest petal
    Come with me...

    Its a language only two can speak
    Spoken without need for words
    A craveing only satisfied by induldgence
    A poet could not do it justice
    As actions still speak louder
    Than all your passionate words

    I never thought I could discover
    This one more colour
    Inside my soul

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it very much. You are most gifted. I wish I could write something that good.
  3. That is SOOOoooo very purely beautiful and evocative and sensual. I do beleive you've come as close to 'justice' as possible through your words. It makes me sigh...

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