Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by The_Discarded, Jun 10, 2008.

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  1. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    I don't have any poetry in me

    I carried it in my pockets, but
    life picked me up by the feet and shook
    until it all poured out strong, and took
    my pennies and pennies and pennies and cents -
    and pennies of sense.

    I don't have any poetry in me

    I used to be able to scribble out words
    and occasionally they'd add up
    to numbers just large enough to OD with,
    and just small enough to understand, yet
    I don't understand.

    I don't have any poetry in me

    Expression seems indispensable.
    Stomach burns with pent-up disorder;
    unspoken concepts remove a glow.
    I sit around and pretend to wax poetic,
    but right when I need it to write when I need it,

    I don't have any poetry in me

    They tell me I can, I will, I do.
    They tell me this standing atop my head.
    And I, under water, and they ahead,
    wonder how long till I'll be dead;
    my words have been said; there is no more.

    So I don't have any poetry in me
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    This is by far the best damn poem I've read in a long time. It's so creative and I love it!!!
  3. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    I really really liked this one

    Amazing writing
  4. fromthatshow

    fromthatshow Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I agree very creative
    love it :smile:
  5. The HELL you don't!!

    (that was...frig...I can't find only ONE word to say everything that's good about it!)
  6. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That was incredible!! You are indeed gifted with expression. I like your poem very much.:smile:
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Absolutely brilliant poem hun :arms:
  8. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    thanks a lot, guys....:smile:
  9. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

  10. fweeps

    fweeps Staff Alumni

    that is an amazing ive ever read i believe!!!
  11. kurenai

    kurenai Well-Known Member

    What are you talking about... there's all this poetry inside you already. :hugtackles:
  12. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    Oh my god!!! Your an amazing poet!!! I'm so completely and utterly amazed!! I haven't seen writing like this in a very long time. Keep writing, and I will keep reading :)
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