Laying You Down (comments are welcomed)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by PressedIn, Jan 7, 2006.

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  1. PressedIn

    PressedIn Well-Known Member

    Laying You Down
    Tease me if you will
    Pluck at my mind
    Driving me insane will only corrupt

    I've stood all I can
    I'm shakey and tired
    When will you quit
    I don't want to hit

    Why won't you go
    Just away from here

    So what am I to do
    When your corpse is laying on the slab
    Where will it tickle you
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Awesome poem,thanks for sharing :)
     
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