let me be

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by triggs, Jul 26, 2009.

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  1. triggs

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    not sure about this - just felt like writing a poem because rosky wrote a great one :)


    let me see
    let me see how this will end
    let me see the ways
    in which you master this pretense
    let me see
    let me see the void
    let me see your soul
    and the arms that you put razors to
    to fill this empty hole
    let me see
    because my eyes, no longer crying
    are not blinded by emotion
    let me see

    let me be
    let this be the end
    let me have my ways
    in which i master my pretense
    let me be
    let me feel the void
    let me keep my soul
    and the arms that i put razors to
    to fill this empty hole
    let me be
    because my eyes, yes they are crying
    and i am blinded by emotion
    let me be
     
  2. rosky71

    rosky71 Well-Known Member

    wow this is truley a great poem. i can really feel this poem(idk if that makes sense) but it kind of hits ya (in a good way) all in all what im trying to say is great poem i love it
     
  3. triggs

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    :) thanks hun xx
     
  4. rosky71

    rosky71 Well-Known Member

    your so welcome
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :)
     
  6. triggs

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    :smile: thankyou lynn xx
     
  7. Songie

    Songie Well-Known Member

    Very well written, Triggs. And I can really relate to it, in some strange slightly messed up way. Thanks for posting it, i really enjoyed reading it :)
     
  8. triggs

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    :smile: thanks Sandra xx
     
  9. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Excellent stuff:goodjob:
     
  10. triggs

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    :smile: thanks pit :biggrin: x
     
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