Letting go.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by tintin, Oct 27, 2008.

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  1. tintin

    tintin Guest

    I remember watching your eyes close for the last time.
    I didn't know you was letting go.
    I remember grandma promising everything would be fine.
    How could she promise when she didn't know?

    I remember watching your coffin disappear behind the net
    I didn't know we was letting go.
    I remember grandma promising never would we forget
    The memories that made you smile and your eyes glow.

    I remember all the hurtful things she said.
    I didn't know she was letting go.
    She killed our friendship left it dead.
    For two years what have we got to show?

    I remember the wish to die.
    I was letting go.
    I remember the friendships that have made me try
    Now to death I say no.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awesome poem hun :hug:
     
  3. notwanting2live

    notwanting2live Well-Known Member

    I think this poem is really good, it makes some people realise, for me as example, what death does to people. Keep it up hunni x

    Take care xx
     
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