Liar

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Terry, Apr 27, 2007.

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  1. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Okay bear with me, haven't done this in a looooooooooooong time; but here goes.

    I won't ever leave
    If you want me to stay.
    Nothing you can do to tear me away.
    Hanging on every word
    Believing the things I heard
    Being a fool.

    Ain't that what you said
    Ain't that what you said
    Ain't that what you said
    LIAR!!

    I won't see no night
    I won't see no day.
    Nothing you can say to tear me away.
    I want to be with you
    As long as you want me to
    I won't run away.

    Ain't that what you said
    Ain't that what you said
    Ain't that what you said.
    LIAR!!
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    that is really good..would love ot hear it played on the piano. :hug:
     
  3. very good Terry :hug: xx
     
  4. Malcontent

    Malcontent Staff Alumni

    Good one, I loves it I does :yes:
     
  5. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    :O so good. :hug:
     
  6. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    It's a great peice of work hun, thanks for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed it. :hug: :hug: :hug: :flowers:
     
  7. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy: Me likes!

    Nicely done. :hug:
     
  8. gentlelady

    gentlelady Staff Alumni

    good work terry.
     
  9. Allo..

    Allo.. Well-Known Member

    =] thank you for sharing *hugs*

    i liked it x
     
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