Life is Poise

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  1. Youlleatamuffinandlikeit

    Youlleatamuffinandlikeit Well-Known Member

    Life is Poise

    Will those gleaming marble halls,
    Let loose those hidden screams?
    See the triumph of the fool,
    The death of all bright things

    I can’t find,
    In my soul,
    A single pound,
    of control
    Am I sick?
    Or deceived?
    Wasting my life in this black sea here

    Cause’ the knife is poised,
    Life insane
    Life is this bruise I’m feeling again
    And again and again

    Can my seat in this lost time?
    Help the vile,
    Born of hunger,
    Empathise in vicious anger

    I am fear,
    Not control,
    Dripping in-through your soul
    You are mine,
    Here consigned,
    Stopping your feet before they land now

    Cause’ life is coins,
    Life is the same,
    Knifing the pure tongue
    Making them slain
    And again and again

    ~ Muffin
     
  2. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    Amazing as usual.

    I really enjoy reading your work. Thank you for sharing.
     
  3. Youlleatamuffinandlikeit

    Youlleatamuffinandlikeit Well-Known Member

    Hey!

    Thank you so much for the positive feedback, it always means a great deal to me. I try to write straight from the heart.
     
  4. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    And i think you do a great job of capturing that.

    I like that it's raw, but also so clean at the same time. Like each word was chosen so carefully.

    I don't know if that makes any sense :laugh:

    Obviously unlike me, mine is raw and disjointed and horrible haha.
     
  5. All these mixed emotions

    All these mixed emotions Well-Known Member

    Sweet and deep!

    //L
     
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