life(song) may trigger

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  1. white

    white Well-Known Member

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    this is my life
    am i who you expected me to be
    take a look inside
    look past the lines
    forget what you see
    take a look inside
    'cause this is the real me
    -
    Im not who you expected me to be.
    where you saw happiness
    there is loneliness
    where you saw pride
    there is fear
    where you saw good
    I see bad
    Where you see strength
    I feel weakness.
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    this is my life
    am i who you expected me to be
    take a look inside
    look past the lines
    forget what you see
    take a look inside
    'cause this is the real me
    -
    Now there is nothing to hold on to
    I lost it all
    With my pride
    That was tore away
    from deep inside.
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    this is my life
    am i who you expected me to be
    take a look inside
    look past the lines
    forget what you see
    take a look inside
    'cause this is the real me
     
  2. white

    white Well-Known Member

    please comment
     
  3. white

    white Well-Known Member

    wow no reply?
     
  4. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Fine song about dashed expectations, personal and public.
     
  5. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    This is really nicely written. Hopefully you will put it to music and record it. :)
     
  6. white

    white Well-Known Member

    I cant sing
    I play instruments
     
  7. white

    white Well-Known Member

    I know what I want the words to sound like
     
  8. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great song white :hug:
     
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