Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Unique, Jul 29, 2007.

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  1. Unique

    Unique Member


    what is this pain
    within my heart
    this agony
    this torture
    cant you see it
    its killing me
    ripping me apart
    i have no hope
    i have no will
    my courage left me
    to fly on its own
    im so alone
    nothing makes sense
    in a daze
    a haze
    im just here
    no feeling
    no words
    just a body
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    Hey hun this poem is deep and very emotional. I am so sorry if this is how you are feeling. I have been there and done that myself. If you ever need to talk feel free to send me a pm and I will get back to you as soon as I get it. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  3. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    It explains everything about how I feel.
    Good job :)
  4. Unique

    Unique Member

    Thanks for the replies. It means a lot. :)
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