Life's Lesson.

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  1. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    It's not organized great I feel :/, but I don't care lol :tongue:
    I wrote it listening to this Hans Zimmer - Time, I'm posting it so maybe you can feel some of the inspiration I felt while I wrote it.

    Life's Lesson
    I guess times are changing
    I just have trouble accepting
    others say my mind state is damaging
    but to me it's just exploring
    other possibilities than the average living
    we need reminders that we're not just human beings
    so stop acting like your eye-sight is incapable of seeing
    who we really are in this world in which we're dreaming
    when we die
    we will be approached with the greeting
    of such a beautiful sight
    simply breathtaking
    so instead of all the built up anger inside
    start believing
    in anything which starts the healing
    while at the same time
    stops all the unnecessary bleeding
    we cry
    because we are leading
    such simplistic lives
    that have lost every ounce of true meaning
    by fake perceptions of what you end up seeing
    when you look to society
    cause all it ends up doing
    is feeding
    a life of fictitious meaning
    and you want to know how to fix it? simple
    start believing
    because trust me I know that feeling
    of staring aimlessly at my reflection
    just to end up seeing
    with no chance of resurrection
    but I was wrong, there is always a chance
    to make things right
    so open your eyes and welcome life's true lesson
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  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautifully written hun I love the postive feel to this poem hugs
  3. Long2beFree

    Long2beFree Member

    this is awesome and nothing less perhaps the pauzes and "," to give it more feel but i didnt need them to get the true feeling of the poem AWESOME
  4. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    Thanks :).
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