"Ligtning Thoughts"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Feb 19, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Lightning Thoughts”

    Like lightning
    My thoughts are
    Too quick to grasp
    Foreign and bleak
    Striking as a fitful asp

    No one sees them, not even myself
    What use are they, in the void of broken neurons?
    I wish I could see their inspiring flash one last time
    To remind myself I’m still alive

    Instead there is only one thought I see
    An almost demonic preoccupation
    With self-destruction
    A horridly foreseeable end

    Like Lightning, my thoughts are soon lost to the dark...
  2. That's such a perfectly apt description of the mind, the tricks is plays, the repercussions, and what we must deal with in that state. I wish you strength...

  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    My username's ironic, because I lack it so. I appreciate the sentiment, though FAL1.
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