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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Sep 24, 2008.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    i dont like writing on lined paper.

    a cage of |||pale||blue||bars|||
    on plain white, pushing out a
    reinforced margin on the side.

    Lateral thinking, giving way to
    pinstriped, pathetic, conformity.

    poetry shouldnt have to be perfect-
    ly neat, or [enclosed] without room to
    b r e a t h e.
    it should be life in the gRaffItI on the walls,
    and marker pen doodled on the desk,
    love crazed, soppy 'i <3 y00hs'

    a random idea written
    on the napkins at a dinner party,
    scribbling, untidy scrawl, to make
    new lines, crossed out, as people cringe.

    but the words, eloquently scrawled,
    will be beautiful.
     
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy:
    What creative talent!
    Loves it. :biggrin:
     
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Thankyou. =)

    TDM
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    awesome :)
     
  5. cinZamurai

    cinZamurai Well-Known Member

    This poem was so nice. Great work, I love it :biggrin:
     
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