Living Requiem

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  1. Living Requiem

    My special friend;
    I’m afraid that I have no more grace
    You’ve no idea the darkness you face
    when you look inside of me
    For I, myself, can no longer see
    the things I once believed
    Tears are few now
    for far too many have been wept
    and all the secret hopes I’ve kept
    instead of setting me free
    have all flown away from me
    I am lost in the winds of despair
    I find it hard to breathe,
    to gasp for air;
    peace once bountiful
    now so rare
    has brought out naught but fear
    inspite of things I once held dear.
    I find it so hard to explain,
    but innate wisdom
    has gone

  2. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy: Another beautiful, incredible poem...although I'm very sorry for all your pain :sad: When I read your poems, I wish I could say something useful..and me saying that is, in itself, useless. So, I'm very sorry. For what its worth, which ain't much, I do love your work.
  3. It's worth something to me.....

    (thank you) Jedes offenen herz ist würdig

    Last edited: Dec 12, 2006
  4. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Sorry... I dont really know what to say to such an amazing piece of poety...


  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    My God you're good!!!:eek:hmy: :eek:hmy: :eek:hmy: As always, I hate that you're feeling so bad as to be able to pen such thoughts, but your talent is incredible all the same!:smile: :smile:

    sending you love and hugs,

    least xoxoxox
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    so beautiful hun...

    your writing keeps me wanting more and more everytime...

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