lonelily

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Moose, Nov 28, 2007.

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  1. Moose

    Moose Well-Known Member

    My friend plays Damein Rice songs alot on his guitar and i sing to them sometimes...but
    i often forget the lyrics so i decided to make my own for Lonelily

    Took me ages to make and this was my first attempt at doing this sort of
    thing..so i know it sucks but it was my best attempt and it reflects my
    past few weeks...the lines in quotes it what i said to her or
    myself...and yah i repeat myself alot but thats the way the song goes...i
    may make a rewrite or make a new one for his other songs but this was
    really hard!

    "dont shun me away"
    "I wont mess up this evening"
    but i lonelily screwed it all up again
    I wasnt sure, you would forgive me
    I was sure you would hate me forever
    But guess who is wrong?
    "I wont mess up this evening"
    But i lonelily screwed it all up again
    And i let you down
    There no point deceiving
    But now im gonna be all alone

    Dont leave me alone, Dont leave me alone

    "Just dont go away"
    "I wont mess up this evening"
    But i was lonelily i was slowly screwing it up anyway
    In a way, i wish i had never met you
    And then i would have never got hurt
    And you let me down
    I thought that you loved me
    But how could i not open my eyes and now you
    have let me down
    I tried my best to fight it
    But it really just wasnt good enough

    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to forgive
    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to forget
    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to move on
    Dont leave me alone
    And your not online yet

    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to forgive
    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to forget
    Dont leave me alone
    And I'm trying to move on
    Dont leave me alone
    And your not online yet
    Dont leave me alone

    Dont leave me alone, Dont leave me alone

    "stay dont go away"
    "I wont mess up this evening"
    But i lonelily screwed it all up again
    And i let you down
    There no point deceiving
    But now im gonna be all alone

    Dont leave any comments like "This sucks i dont understand" or "This isnt poetry why is it here?" because theres no place to put songs
     
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  2. Smashed__

    Smashed__ Well-Known Member

    I admire you even trying, Its hard (for many) to write poetry and lyrics so I think it's great!

    when are you two going to record? :wink:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Nice work sweets :arms:
     
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