Lonely little me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shadow_of_regret, Nov 20, 2010.

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  1. shadow_of_regret

    shadow_of_regret Chat Buddy

    Lonley Child
    It's not my fault
    The tears fall down
    Like raindrops splash
    On dirty ground

    It's not my fault
    You were never there
    I raised myself
    You didn't care

    It's not my fault
    Lifeless bodies wander
    Pretending to love
    And ask and wonder

    It's not my fault
    I have no heart
    I'm empty inside
    I'm torn apart

    So it's not my fault
    When I get mad and slam doors
    It's not my fault
    You see, it's yours
     
  2. oval

    oval Well-Known Member

    welcome to the forum andrew :smile:
    i really like your poem! i can also relate alot to the message of it.
    hope you stick around :smile:
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    So sad but know that you are welcome here and need not be lonely...thanks for sharing and I know first hand what you are saying...J
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Glad you know where to put the fault too i to can relate to the poem glad you are her.
     
  5. shadow_of_regret

    shadow_of_regret Chat Buddy

    Thanks guys, Its nice to feel wanted :)
     
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