Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FallenRyo, Sep 12, 2009.

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  1. FallenRyo

    FallenRyo Active Member

    I'm just writing to see what you all think.

    "Lonley pain all I know
    Noone to cry to or even to care
    Having to always feel so low
    It's all too much to bear

    So I say farewell, good night
    With nothing on which to hold
    Fallen away from the light
    Lost into the darkest cold."
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    Seems very deep.
    Kinda seems the way I sometimes feel.
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    very well written very sad Keep writing okay it does help
  4. The Scream

    The Scream Well-Known Member

    nice <3
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great :D
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