look beyond the shadows(written for people that ignore your suffering)

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  1. the masked depressant

    the masked depressant Well-Known Member

    look beyond the shadows

    look beyond the shadows, and tell me what you see?

    the shattered peaces of a dream

    the chains that once bound me

    look beyond the shadows,

    tell me what you hear?

    the silent screams of panic

    the ones you ignored for years

    look beyond the shadows,

    there's someone still alive

    clinging on to life's thin edge

    trying to survive

    look beyond the shadows
    why are you looking back?

    are you scared of something

    a quality you lack?

    look beyond the shadows

    look in to the dark

    it's too late to save me

    you've really left a mark

    look beyond the shadows
    do you really care?

    do you want to see me 1 last time

    tell me are you scared?

    look beyond the shadows

    the time has come to die

    you never tried to save me

    and still i wonder

    why?
     
  2. hollowvoice

    hollowvoice Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    your really good at expressing your life in poetry

    these could be my words i wonder why ??

    really good poem

    well done
     
  3. the masked depressant

    the masked depressant Well-Known Member



    thanks.

    currently working on one called the final journey, so i'll post that when it's done
     
  4. OrbitalPoet

    OrbitalPoet Active Member

    Thankyou lost and alone,
    Thankyou.
     
  5. the masked depressant

    the masked depressant Well-Known Member



    you are very welcome.

    :)
     
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