Loser

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Shadowplay, Dec 12, 2006.

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  1. Shadowplay

    Shadowplay Staff Alumni

    Work in progress...

    -Loser-

    http://media.putfile.com/loser-44

    I'm a loser when I'm stoned.
    I'm a loser when I'm home.
    I'm a loser if I try.
    I'm a loser if I die.
    I'm a loser in the wind.
    I'm a loser if I sin.
    I'm a loser on my own.
    I'm a loser, I should have know.

    Come on and make me!
    Come on and break me!
    Come on and take me home!

    I'm a loser when I'm stoned.
    I'm a loser when I'm home.
    I'm a loser if I try.
    I'm a loser if I die.
    I'm a loser in the wind.
    I'm a loser if I sin.
    I'm a loser, shit my own.
    I'm a loser, I should have know.
     
  2. You're not a loser when you write
    When you write you're oughta sight,
    when you express you let in light,
    when you "tell", there's still a fight
    Do so with all your might...


    FAL1
     
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    You're not a loser hun... :hug:

    TDM
     
  4. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    :eek:hmy: love it!

    No way you're a loser.. :hug:
     
  5. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    we can be losers together :tongue:
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    loser is a strong word for anyone to be called...

    it was a great poem.. and every expressive

    BP
     
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