Losing the Light

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Nov 11, 2006.

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  1. Losing the Light

    Heavy lethargy and
    settle like dust
    in an unused room
    The space inside, stagnant,
    once vibrant,
    what a shame
    Once alive,
    what a waste
    For there’s nothing new
    appearing to replace
    the old pain
    Even the familiar throbbing
    has gone numb;
    endless grey
    is what it’s become
    What is the use of reacting
    when the long, hard fight,
    the fervent quest for sight
    has been for nothing,
    is lost,
    revealing naught but futility
    for all the bitter cost
    of finding,
    then losing
    the light

  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    Love the poem:smile: , but not the feelings behind its inception.:sad: Your written insight is right on, but I wish you weren't feeling so shitty and so much "in the dark".:sad:

    love always,

  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :hug:
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