Lost within myself...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by brokenandlonely, Apr 23, 2010.

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  1. brokenandlonely

    brokenandlonely Well-Known Member

    As gently as I try to climb, the Deeper I fall
    The more I know about sorrow in my very own soul
    I hear the screams, the screams of my youth, my past and the truth
    I feel the future, quiet, unknowing of what it holds
    I search for something, someone, anything I might recognize
    I try to show you, a sign that all I felt, all i went through was anything but nothing
    I'm lost, in the darkness of my mind
    I try to fight to hold onto myself
    I'm afraid of disappearing, fading away in the black which surrounds me
    I scream so very loud, but no one hears me
    I try, but nobody can help me escape from this dark
    I can only hear the silence
    I feel the silence everywhere around me
    It deafens my voice
    It fades my existence
    It slowly takes over my soul
     
  2. lightbeam

    lightbeam Antiquities Friend

    Thanks for that Harry. You mirror me when I get down. Nice job!
     
  3. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    yet again, you've really captured something, a feeling. idk thats my 2cents worth >.<
     
  4. Hdhsjsjsz

    Hdhsjsjsz Well-Known Member

    just the way i feel.. amazing work
     
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