Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Mya, Jan 6, 2007.

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  1. Mya

    Mya Well-Known Member

    i went for a walk in the forest,
    the nice quiet forest,
    i turned left then right,
    left, right, left, right
    when i came to an area of the forest that was compleatly dark...
    i turned to try to walk back,
    but the path that i had been following was no were to be seen,
    i screamed,
    but of course no one heard me...
    i cryed,
    but of course no one saw me...
    so i sat,
    and found that the dark,
    gave me the best feeling in the world...
    the feeling of being lost...
    for years counclers have tryed,
    to find me...
    im lost...
    lost inside my own soul...
    were no one can hear me scream,
    and no one can see me cry,

    P.s I CANT SPELL!!!
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    who cares about your spelling hun...

    it was a great poem to begin with... and i loved it so much...

    keep up the great work...

  3. Mya

    Mya Well-Known Member

    Thanks.. i wrote that off the top of my head...i have a question..do you think im good enuph to be published?
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