Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by deb22, Jan 23, 2015.

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  1. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    The snow fell silent, thick and without direction
    My thoughts buried beneath the cold of my despair
    I shuddered in the darkness, wanting answers from above
    My heart ache growing and in need of repair

    Footprints now faded, covered lightly with flakes
    My shoulders hunched upwards all knotted and tight
    I gazed at the stars, my mind so unclear
    As the clouds moved swiftly in, blocking the light

    Turning away, my back to the wind, I walked
    The darkness lifted and the moon shone through
    With heavy breath guided by the light of the path
    I fell to my knees and in an instant... I knew
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    You create such a picture a mood with your words very well written your poem
  3. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    Thanks total eclipse, Yesterday was a bad night and writing is helping me get over my grief.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautifully written, :hug:
  5. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    Thanks Petal, I am having a good day today, Maybe in the future I will be able to write something fuzzy and warm... well maybe not quite that fuzzy but more uplifting
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