Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Drekono, Oct 14, 2009.

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  1. Drekono

    Drekono Well-Known Member

    A lonely soul lost in thought
    A life so dark but still he fought

    Until this day in which he finds
    All along its been his mind

    Countless battles waged and lost
    Only now he knows the cost

    He lost himself sometime ago
    Now it’s time for all to know

    Sitting in the mirror's gaze
    he slips into a distant haze

    One last look before he goes
    At all he hates but all he knows

    Eyes glazed over and shoulders hung low
    He breaths in long and slow
  2. I need help

    I need help Well-Known Member

    I have to say I really loved your poem! its well written...
    those emotions arent new to me!..stay strong!
    I'm always here if you need to talk about stuff!
  3. Vangelis

    Vangelis Well-Known Member

    I can relate to this very well. Nice read.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Ooo I like :)

    Thank you for sharing :heart:
  5. Drekono

    Drekono Well-Known Member

    Thank you for the replies. I am glad you liked it :)
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