Magnet poetry is kind of cool

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Aphorism, Oct 23, 2012.

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  1. Aphorism

    Aphorism Well-Known Member

    I made magnet poetry recently, at someone's house. I don't know why, but I felt like sharing. I guess in its way it is cliche and a bit shallow, but that's how I feel sometimes. Empty, and an average teen rebel, drinking and smoking to avoid my problems. Or to seem cool. Either way, I end up looking like an idiot.

    Here's the poem:

    I party but
    my friend
    always lived to never
    at night
    when understanding is needed;
    make art
    smoke weed
    get drunk
    drink a beer keg
    & shot of tequila
    so love hurts
  2. NYJmpMaster

    NYJmpMaster Have a question? Message Me Staff Member Forum Owner ADMIN

    Not shallow, real. And cliche means that it happens often - not that it is less valid- and you put it very well. Thank you for sharing.

    And far far from being an idiot - insight shows strength and character and intellect.
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