Make It Raindown

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Feb 23, 2007.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    Make it raindown,
    Glistening tears from the sky.
    Stepping out into the shower.
    When it rains
    Does someone cry?
    Does the heart
    Long for the sun?
    Clouded by doubts,
    The sun is inadequate.
    Stiffled by the dreary clouds.
    Screaming out, it is still unnoticed.
    Give up on the hope for light,
    Make it raindown.

    :unsure:
     
  2. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    awww tis beautiful :hug: i lub it
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    I like this one a lot...

    very very good!

    ~C
     
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