Memory

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jess, Nov 8, 2006.

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  1. Jess

    Jess Guest

    My hear just fell from a mountain top
    Heart keeps beating, It wont stop
    Another piece of me
    Fails to leave
    One day I'll just fail to be
    When the day comes I cease to breathe
    That one small piece of me
    Will always be a memory of me​






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  2. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I really really like this..especially the first line. Just..wow.
     
  3. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    wow nice poem Jess :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Nice poem :smile:
     
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