Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Jul 28, 2012.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member


    I stumble in my darkness with regularity
    My thoughts span out to form various constellations
    The consolation prize awarded based upon merit:
    A disease that leaves me torn up internally
    Beats me down at every turn, and creates its own little plot twists
    Fools my brain, and tricks my mind
    My spirit removed with medical precision
    Task completion endlessly fails, even with the creation of lists upon lists
    A paper trail of to-do's and reminders extends out behind
    All thanks to my brain, and its lost mind
  2. lightbeam

    lightbeam Antiquities Friend

    I like it Ben! :hug: We all have a lost mind at some time.
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    It seems your poetry can really express many things so well done
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